Revised an old favorite

COPYRIGHT Sharayah Pranger 2013

Space Whales

It’s awfully nice,

as the moon fills the sky,

to gaze at the clear starry yonder,

to feel the first sweet

chilly smooches of snow,

or cringe under lightning and thunder!

There are things you expect

in the big up-above-

constellations or windy-cold hail,

but when’s the last time

your face turned to the stars

and your eyes caught a glimpse… of a whale?

A whale, a whale! A lovely space whale!

Why, he’s ten times the size of Neptune!

He swims through the sky just as if it’s the sea

And he bellows a song at the moon.

Planets spin with a slap of his luminous  tail

And he winks at the comets that kiss him.

He’s a whale, a whale! A lovely space whale!

Oh, how pleasant! Don’t blink, or you’ll miss him!

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3 Responses to Revised an old favorite

  1. yasniger says:

    Reblogged this on yasniger and commented:
    From the big starry constellations above

  2. yonder, thunder…yes, such a great slant rhyme. I enjoyed the poem : )

  3. Sharayah says:

    Thank you! So glad you liked it. :)

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